Saturday, June 17, 2017

#Barathon 1/7 Deadly Sin: Gula (Gluttony)

She had planned to diet from now on
She ate healthy all day
Someone, ordered pizza at work.
She reached for that forbidden piece
"Just one piece" she said

And first deadly sin Gula (gluttony) silently smirked




This post is written for BAR-A-THON 2017 and my Theme for this year is Seven Deadly Sins


11 comments:

  1. Don't we all give in to that one tempting piece of pizza or cake? Gluttony is good, sometimes:)

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    1. Guilty as charged. Everytime.
      I am the girl in the prose :P
      Thanks for commenting Namratha :-)

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  2. Visiting from the Barathon challenge. Truly enjoyed your take on the prompt. Cheers! Marquessa @simplymarquessa from Simply Marquessa

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    1. Thank you Marquessa :-)
      I love your name

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  3. Good one! So apt for our times, I think. Gluttony is the root case of most health issues. Been there too!

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    1. I agree, but controlling and disciplining self is the most difficult part :P
      Thanks for commenting Esha :-)

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  4. ha ha! that one piece that adds to all that could have been avoided. Story of my life :P

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    1. That one piece is never the last piece. Its a story of so many people's life and that girl in the poem is me :P
      Thanks for dropping by Parul :-)

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  5. Very much the story of my life... except for the part where I atleast try to eat healthy!!!

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    1. Welcome to the club, there are few like me, who try but are too gullible to good food. :P
      Thanks for dropping by Rohan

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  6. It feels terrific and terrible at the same time when I end up doing this!! ;-)

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