Monday, September 21, 2015

ABCW & Mag: Morning Frost

photo by Tess Kincaid

First rain, Early morning frost
Deep in thoughts I drew, girl on a lonely night
With the moon beside
I realize, that is who I am
A hollow girl in the dew
Come sunshine, I shall vanish
No one would ever know
That once a hollow girl stood there on a lonely night
With the half moon shining so bright

This post is written for Magpie Tales - Mag 286
This post is written for ABCW - M


  1. The yearnings of the young innocents wanting to have some fun like that of their friends! Nothing serious but just!


    1. Peer pressure :)

      Thanks for dropping by Hank

  2. To be the dew dissipating in the sun.. I hope we grow more substance than that as we age.

    1. Many a times a person full of substance will feel hollow inside due to circumstances,hope time brings the lost substance back

  3. She has been appearing a long time , so maybe not so ephemeral after all !

  4. Ah yes, and may she carry on day by day!

  5. Replies
    1. memories are the hardest things to lose
      Thanks for commenting Rog :)

  6. although well written your poem makes me sad.... I hope you do not feel the way that person does. Wouldn't wish that for anybody

    Have a nice abc-wednesday-day / - week
    ♫ M e l ☺ d y ♫ (abc-w-team)

    1. Melody, luckliy I do not feel like the person does and yes, I never want anyone to go through such a phase
      Thanks for the comment :)


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