Tuesday, July 7, 2015

FSF: Thief


He started from nothing, A selfish man,  A thief in a disguise.

He wanted everything a man could possess, He was ambitious, A thief in disguise.

Along the way, he gathered gold, Along the way, he hurt, killed and stole, For, he was the thief in disguise.

And came that day when, destiny struck its Golden sword, Without no friends, was lying his bloodied body so sore, All the riches, gone and washed away, No one to console, when alone he lay. That day he, loneliness made him realize, He was nothing.

 It was Time always,who is a thief in disguise

This post is written for Lillie Mcferrin - FSF: Thief

18 comments:

  1. yeah it's sad when you have acquired so much yet you have nothing
    Tina from The Sunny Side of Life

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    1. Sometimes when you reach the top and look down, you find yourself alone
      Thanks for reading

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  2. The last line is really awesome. Very thoughtful post :)

    http://drsushreedash.blogspot.in/2015/07/thief.html

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  3. almost sounds like a folk song, very cool!

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    1. Woow, thats an amazing compliment. Thanks Mandy

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  4. Unfortunately some people deserve such endings.

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    1. karma -What goes around come around

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  5. I really like this, especially the last line. Makes me think about all the things we gain in life, everything we work for - what is it worth in the end?

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    1. In the end, its just worth a piece of land six feet deep

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  6. Time is indeed, the ultimate thief.

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  7. It was his KARMA - that came around. What use of the riches when a person doesn't have a companion or friends in times of ill-health. sad. A sensitive message sent across.

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  8. What's the point of all those riches when alone in life? Fantastic post, beautifully written. x

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  9. That was profound, loved the last line :-)
    Cheers, Archana - www.drishti.co

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