Friday, March 14, 2014

Lucky and Alive

One day.
One Semi fatal accident in the middle of nowhere
Saved by some strangers in a bloody semi-concious state.
Feeling dizzy, opening the eyes and overhearing Mom saying "My baby is alive. Thank God, My baby is alive"
For once, I feel like I touched heaven and came back.

This post was written for the Five Sentence Fiction - Lucky for Lille McFerrin

14 comments:

  1. Oh wow! High emotion drama indeed :)

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    1. Thank you soumya, I got the idea to write FSF coz of you only and I totally love Life of Leo...
      You write just wonderful

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  2. When you come so close to death, you start to feel so much more grateful for life :) Awesome story!

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    1. So true, You start feeling grateful for everything and everyone in life

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  3. Very good post. You and I must have been thinking along the same lines for this post. Mine was about a car accident too.

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    1. I did read urs too
      Nicely written
      Well worded

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  4. If it looks like I'm entering twice, I am, because I wasn't sure if my first comment went through. I really enjoyed your post. We both had very similar ideas for "Lucky." I too, wrote a story about a car accident. I enjoyed yours very much.

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  5. Real to life, certainly. I see it when I travel. Well done.
    http://mcguffysreader.blogspot.com/2014/03/lucky.html

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  6. Lucky get away, that. Nicely done.

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    1. Very close shave
      Someone down here loves me more than someone up there

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